Draft of my persuasive speech #3
Hey, guys! I'm hear today again to rewrite my persuasive speech again and add some important things.
↘ - nuclear tone (fall)
↗ - nuclear tone (rise)
| - pauses
... - fast pace;
... - low pace;
(h) - high pitch;
(l) - low pitch;
(l)The world's going to↘ end tomorrow. | (h)↗ Surprised? | (l)What if this is (h)↗ true? | (l) Maybe not ↘today, | (h) but ↗someday | (l) this isn’t something you can simply ↘joke about. | (l)So can we (h)↗ save our planet? | (l)Have you ever thought about (l)↗the reasons of thoughtless relation of people to the environment? | (l) If so | (l)how can we ↘save it | (l)and most importantly how we can save ↘us. |
(l)You know that we're going through ↘ hard times now. | (l)People ↘ have to stay at home. (h) | I believe | (l)that this ↘ huge problem, known as coronavirus, |(l) let us an opportunity to see ↘ how all of us influenced on our planet and on the environment before. | (l)As we can observe | the air in many countries has become ↘ cleaner, | (l)the water in the canals of Venice has become ↘ much better, | (l )many animals have returned to their ↘ former places of residence. | (l)So perhaps | (h)is it better for planet to be ↗ without us? | (l)But it's still worth trying to ↘ change your attitude to nature. |
(h)↗ I'd like to say | (l)that the environment plays a ↘pivotal role in the existence and growth of all living things on earth | (l)and importantly to ↘humankind’s daily. |
(h)So ↗today | (l)I'm going to speak about ↘main aspects of the state of our planet. | (l)↘There are |
1.) (l)↘The impact of human activities on the environment; |
2.) (l)The most↘ dangerous problems for our planet; |
3.) (l)Steps to start ↘saving our planet. |
(h)↗First of all, | (l)people are considered to be the most ↘intelligent creatures on Earth | (l)who are ↘able to learn and create new things. | (h)↗Certainly, |(l) there are ↘many benefits in technological development for us | (l)but it ↘also destroys our environment gradually. | (l)We develop technologies and science to make our life↘ better. | (h)But in the ↗ same time | (l)we don't fall to thinking that it can ruin ↘everything that surround us in the near future. |(l) I want to ask ↘you. | (h)↗Have you ever thought of daily things which have a bad influence on the nature? | (l)↘Asking people |(l) if they ↘turn off the light when they leave the room, | (l)↘pull the plug out of the socket if the phone doesn't charge, | (l)↘turn off the water when they don't need it. | (l)The answer is usually ↘NO. | (h)And what about ↗you? | (h)Even these little things gradually ↗destroy our environment!|
(l)So↘ now | (l)let's speak about the most ↘ dangerous problems on out planet. |
(h)↗Firstly, | (l) it's ↘ water pollution. | (l)A lot of garbage is thrown ↘ directly into the water. | (h)↗ Moreover, | (l)a lot of factories, mills, and plants discharge the untreated industrial wastes into the water ↘ bodies. | (l)The contamination of the living environment leads to the ↘ deaths of the entire natural ecosystems. | (l)There are ↘ many approaches to garbage utilization | (l)but most of the poor countries just ↘ don't have enough money to introduce such up-to-date technologies. | (h)But ↗still | (l)you know that the water is our ↘ source of life. | (l)We just ↘ all die without it! |
(l)The ↘second danger | (l) is an ↘air pollution. | (l)The air we breathe has contaminated because of uncontrolled release of harmful vehicular and industrial ↘smokes. | (l)The air is ↘ full of harmful substances. | And ()l↘I, | (l)↘you, | (l)↘your neighbour, | (l)all of us breathe it every day of our↘ life. | (h)Do you know what these air pollution ↗ lead to? | (l)↘Global warming. | (l)Glaciers are ↘melting, | (l)sea levels are ↘rising, | (l) cloud forests are ↘dying, | (l)and wildlife is ↘scrambling to keep pace. | (l)Thc climate's ↘changing. | (l)It leads to the death of ↘all living things. |
(l)But ↘ finally, | (h)↗what do you think? | (h)Can we ↗change everything? | (l)Every person on our planet should take a ↘ little step to save our environment and ↘ maintain its originality. | (l)We should reduce (l)↘ water wastage, | (l)save ↘ energy, | (l)use ↘ rechargeable batteries, | (l)reuse our ↘ old things in new ways, | (l)and throw ↘ wastes properly to its place only. | (l)People use the components of the environment to fulfill their ↘ basic needs of living. | (l) We should ↘ stop polluting and challenging our national resources ↘ to ensure sustainable living conditions for our future generations.| (l)Just try taking these ↘ steps | (l)and the Earth will be ↘ grateful to you. |
(l)↘All in all, | (l) I can ↘say | (l)that it is the responsibility of each one of us to do our bit for the ↘environment. | (h)↗Global environmental problems | (l)like greenhouse ↘effects, | (l)global ↘warming etc. have already become the concern for ↘ every nation. | (l)A collaborative effort to address these problems would be a ↘ better strategy | (l)while each nation is not equally adept to solve the ↘global problems. | (l)It can only be ↘prevented. | (h)So, let's take care of the world that ↘surrounds us! | (l)nd as Darryl Cherney once ↘said | “(l)I'm not an ↘environmentalist. | (l)I'm an ↘Earth warrior.” |
By CAMOMILE
↘ - nuclear tone (fall)
↗ - nuclear tone (rise)
| - pauses
... - fast pace;
... - low pace;
(h) - high pitch;
(l) - low pitch;
(l)The world's going to↘ end tomorrow. | (h)↗ Surprised? | (l)What if this is (h)↗ true? | (l) Maybe not ↘today, | (h) but ↗someday | (l) this isn’t something you can simply ↘joke about. | (l)So can we (h)↗ save our planet? | (l)Have you ever thought about (l)↗the reasons of thoughtless relation of people to the environment? | (l) If so | (l)how can we ↘save it | (l)and most importantly how we can save ↘us. |
(l)You know that we're going through ↘ hard times now. | (l)People ↘ have to stay at home. (h) | I believe | (l)that this ↘ huge problem, known as coronavirus, |(l) let us an opportunity to see ↘ how all of us influenced on our planet and on the environment before. | (l)As we can observe | the air in many countries has become ↘ cleaner, | (l)the water in the canals of Venice has become ↘ much better, | (l )many animals have returned to their ↘ former places of residence. | (l)So perhaps | (h)is it better for planet to be ↗ without us? | (l)But it's still worth trying to ↘ change your attitude to nature. |
(h)↗ I'd like to say | (l)that the environment plays a ↘pivotal role in the existence and growth of all living things on earth | (l)and importantly to ↘humankind’s daily. |
(h)So ↗today | (l)I'm going to speak about ↘main aspects of the state of our planet. | (l)↘There are |
1.) (l)↘The impact of human activities on the environment; |
2.) (l)The most↘ dangerous problems for our planet; |
3.) (l)Steps to start ↘saving our planet. |
(h)↗First of all, | (l)people are considered to be the most ↘intelligent creatures on Earth | (l)who are ↘able to learn and create new things. | (h)↗Certainly, |(l) there are ↘many benefits in technological development for us | (l)but it ↘also destroys our environment gradually. | (l)We develop technologies and science to make our life↘ better. | (h)But in the ↗ same time | (l)we don't fall to thinking that it can ruin ↘everything that surround us in the near future. |(l) I want to ask ↘you. | (h)↗Have you ever thought of daily things which have a bad influence on the nature? | (l)↘Asking people |(l) if they ↘turn off the light when they leave the room, | (l)↘pull the plug out of the socket if the phone doesn't charge, | (l)↘turn off the water when they don't need it. | (l)The answer is usually ↘NO. | (h)And what about ↗you? | (h)Even these little things gradually ↗destroy our environment!|
(l)So↘ now | (l)let's speak about the most ↘ dangerous problems on out planet. |
(h)↗Firstly, | (l) it's ↘ water pollution. | (l)A lot of garbage is thrown ↘ directly into the water. | (h)↗ Moreover, | (l)a lot of factories, mills, and plants discharge the untreated industrial wastes into the water ↘ bodies. | (l)The contamination of the living environment leads to the ↘ deaths of the entire natural ecosystems. | (l)There are ↘ many approaches to garbage utilization | (l)but most of the poor countries just ↘ don't have enough money to introduce such up-to-date technologies. | (h)But ↗still | (l)you know that the water is our ↘ source of life. | (l)We just ↘ all die without it! |
(l)The ↘second danger | (l) is an ↘air pollution. | (l)The air we breathe has contaminated because of uncontrolled release of harmful vehicular and industrial ↘smokes. | (l)The air is ↘ full of harmful substances. | And ()l↘I, | (l)↘you, | (l)↘your neighbour, | (l)all of us breathe it every day of our↘ life. | (h)Do you know what these air pollution ↗ lead to? | (l)↘Global warming. | (l)Glaciers are ↘melting, | (l)sea levels are ↘rising, | (l) cloud forests are ↘dying, | (l)and wildlife is ↘scrambling to keep pace. | (l)Thc climate's ↘changing. | (l)It leads to the death of ↘all living things. |
(l)But ↘ finally, | (h)↗what do you think? | (h)Can we ↗change everything? | (l)Every person on our planet should take a ↘ little step to save our environment and ↘ maintain its originality. | (l)We should reduce (l)↘ water wastage, | (l)save ↘ energy, | (l)use ↘ rechargeable batteries, | (l)reuse our ↘ old things in new ways, | (l)and throw ↘ wastes properly to its place only. | (l)People use the components of the environment to fulfill their ↘ basic needs of living. | (l) We should ↘ stop polluting and challenging our national resources ↘ to ensure sustainable living conditions for our future generations.| (l)Just try taking these ↘ steps | (l)and the Earth will be ↘ grateful to you. |
(l)↘All in all, | (l) I can ↘say | (l)that it is the responsibility of each one of us to do our bit for the ↘environment. | (h)↗Global environmental problems | (l)like greenhouse ↘effects, | (l)global ↘warming etc. have already become the concern for ↘ every nation. | (l)A collaborative effort to address these problems would be a ↘ better strategy | (l)while each nation is not equally adept to solve the ↘global problems. | (l)It can only be ↘prevented. | (h)So, let's take care of the world that ↘surrounds us! | (l)nd as Darryl Cherney once ↘said | “(l)I'm not an ↘environmentalist. | (l)I'm an ↘Earth warrior.” |
By CAMOMILE
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