It's time to "speak up" #12

Hey there, everyone! Nice to read for you again! On this week I'm going to start with the evaluation of my groupmate's speech, Saiyyna.



Her speech was about informative speech.
Let's have a look at my evaluation

1. Introduction

What technique(s) was used in the introduction? 
She used the chain of rhetorical questions.

Any link-element? 
Yes, she used it:" Every day we share information with each other. It is one of the most widely used and important ways of communication. However, it is hardly possible to say that everybody knows how to present informative speeches efficiently and clearly."

Was the thesis statement given? 
Certainly. There is: "Your goal is to give such informative speeches that all listeners would understand and become curious and interested about."

How effective was the introduction? 
Very effective          Average          Not effective         Max 10 pts
10   8                    7  6  5               4  3  2  1                     9

2. Body

How well structured was the information presented? 
Highly organized            Some organization        None
  10      9       8                       7    6   5    4             3  2  1

What organizational structure was used in the body of the speech? 
Firstly, she used the outlining, which helps not to loose the structure of  the speech. Also there are a lot of supporting material such as a presentation. Signposts help to follow to the headings. 

How understandable was the information (was it clearly explained)?
Very good           Had some problems         Had major problems
10   9   8                  7   6   5   4                          3   2   1

Quality of point-support (appropriateness, completeness, variety)
Lots of                Some                  Almost no
10   9   8           7   6   5                 4   3   2   1

Use of facts, illustrations, examples, stories.
Lots of               Some                  None
10   9   8           7   6   5              4   3   2   1

Was it coherent?
10     9    8   7    6   5   4   3    2   1

Max 10 pts      -      10 pts


3. Conclusion

-What technique(s) was used in the conclusion? 
She used the quote to conclude her speech: “Practice like you've never won. Perform like you've never lost.”

-Were all the steps followed (summary, action, emotional appeal?) 
Everything is ok, besides action. I'd like to see more. 

-How effective was the conclusion?
Very effective         Some conclusion        None
10   9   8                     7   6   5   4             3   2   1

Total points: 27 
Given points: 30

That's it for now. See you soon!

By CAMOMILE

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