It's time to "speak up" #8
Hey there! On the previous week one of my groupmate gave a speech as always. Today I'm going to evaluate her performance here. By the way, she made a vidoe and actually it was funny and attentive.
Kate's topic was " Writing a speech. Effective language".
Let's have a look at my evaluation
1. Introduction
- What technique(s) was used in the introduction?
Kate used such a technique as a rhetorical equations.
- Any link-element?
- Was the thesis statement given?
I think it was "With careful planning and an eye for detail, you can write a speech that will inform, persuade, motivate, or entertain!"
- How effective was the introduction?
Very effective Average Not effective Max 10 pts
10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 10
2. Body
- How well structured was the information presented?
Highly organized Some organization None
10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1
- What organizational structure was used in the body of the speech?
Kate used outlining which helps to understand the following speech properly. Also she had a lot of supporting material and a bright and clear presentation.
- How understandable was the information (was it clearly explained)?
Very good Had some problems Had major problems
10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1
- Quality of point-support (appropriateness, completeness, variety)
Lots of Some Almost no
10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1
- Use of facts, illustrations, examples, stories.
Lots of Some None
10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1
- Was it coherent?
10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1
Max 10 pts - 9 pts
3. Conclusion
-What technique(s) was used in the conclusion?
Kate summarized all the information, told the audience the main points of her speech to make it more precise.
-Were all the steps followed (summary, action, emotional appeal?)
All steps were followed.
-How effective was the conclusion?
Very effective Some conclusion None
10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1
Total points: 29
Given points: 30
Thank ypu for your attention to my posts!
By CAMOMILE
Kate's topic was " Writing a speech. Effective language".
Let's have a look at my evaluation
1. Introduction
- What technique(s) was used in the introduction?
Kate used such a technique as a rhetorical equations.
- Any link-element?
Yes, I can observe link-element in her speech.
I think it was "With careful planning and an eye for detail, you can write a speech that will inform, persuade, motivate, or entertain!"
- How effective was the introduction?
Very effective Average Not effective Max 10 pts
10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 10
2. Body
- How well structured was the information presented?
Highly organized Some organization None
10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1
- What organizational structure was used in the body of the speech?
Kate used outlining which helps to understand the following speech properly. Also she had a lot of supporting material and a bright and clear presentation.
- How understandable was the information (was it clearly explained)?
Very good Had some problems Had major problems
10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1
- Quality of point-support (appropriateness, completeness, variety)
Lots of Some Almost no
10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1
- Use of facts, illustrations, examples, stories.
Lots of Some None
10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1
- Was it coherent?
10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1
Max 10 pts - 9 pts
3. Conclusion
-What technique(s) was used in the conclusion?
Kate summarized all the information, told the audience the main points of her speech to make it more precise.
-Were all the steps followed (summary, action, emotional appeal?)
All steps were followed.
-How effective was the conclusion?
Very effective Some conclusion None
10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1
Total points: 29
Given points: 30
Thank ypu for your attention to my posts!
By CAMOMILE
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